Hi Lucinda, I'm a Year 8 student from St Bernadette's school. I think you really made a "beaudesert show" sound really fun, but what is a "beaudesert show"? Could you also include what a "Cinquian poem" is to engage and let the viewers actually know what they're reading about?
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Hi Lucinda,
ReplyDeletegood work but maybe next check with Mrs Egan if it is right because the syllables go 2 4 6 8 2 not 2 4 6 1 1. but good work anyway bye
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DeleteHi Lucinda,
ReplyDeleteI'm a Year 8 student from St Bernadette's school. I think you really made a "beaudesert show" sound really fun, but what is a "beaudesert show"? Could you also include what a "Cinquian poem" is to engage and let the viewers actually know what they're reading about?
- Thanks!